After a lot more work on the essay and taking into consideration all of the points that had been discussed in the tutorials, I had a draft that was much closer to being completed and had all of the images as references now included so it was a really useful time to get feedback on before I finalised it all. The comments on the right show the points in the essay that I need to have a closer look at. To progress, I also need to finalise the introduction and conclusion
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